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The Enterprise is captured by an alien claiming to be Apollo, the Greek god of the sun.

Summary[]

Teaser[]

Montgomery Scott is flirting with Lieutenant Carolyn Palamas on the bridge while Kirk and McCoy lightly tease him. But as the USS Enterprise nears the planet Pollux IV, a huge green hand made of energy suddenly materializes in space, catching and holding the ship. "Am I… seeing things?" Ensign Pavel Chekov exclaims. Captain Kirk orders the Enterprise to reverse all its engines, but the "hand" manages to hold the ship anyway. "Helm doesn't answer. We can't move!" Lieutenant Sulu states. Kirk orders Uhura to send word to Starbase 12.

Act One[]

After a couple of failed attempts to break free of the "hand" holding the Enterprise in space, scanner five-seven displays the ghostly, laurel-wreathed head of a man. Claiming the eons have passed, he welcomes the Enterprise crew, congratulating his "beloved children" for leaving their plains and valleys and making a "bold venture" into deep space. Among other things, this being claims familiarity with Earth of five thousand years ago, dropping the names of individuals alive then. Captain Kirk's repeated demands for freedom finally irritate him, and he threatens to "close his hand" and crush the ship – a threat sufficiently credible that Kirk agrees to visit the planet with his officers, expressly omitting Spock, with the being saying that the Vulcan reminds him of Pan, whom he had always found boring.

The landing party consists of Kirk, McCoy, Scott, Chekov, and Palamas, who is trained in archaeology, anthropology, and ancient civilizations, all fields likely to be of some use. Materializing on the surface, the five crew members meet the being responsible for their capture, a being familiar with ancient Earth, who introduces himself as Apollo. Upon hearing this, Chekov exclaims, "And I am the tsar of all the Russias!" When Kirk rebukes him for this, Chekov apologizes and explains, "I never met a god before." Kirk then admonishes him, replying "And you haven't yet." Despite Apollo's claims, McCoy's tricorder scans show him to be a "simple humanoid." Growing to a gigantic height, Apollo looks down at Kirk and the crew, and in a loud, booming voice, he intones, "Welcome to Olympus, Captain Kirk!"

Act Two[]

Apollo claims he and others – Zeus, Athena, Aphrodite, Hera, Hermes, and Artemis – were a "gallant band of travelers" who visited Earth some five thousand years ago. He demands to be worshiped by the Enterprise landing party, and in return offers a simple yet pleasurable life. He reveals himself as petulant and arrogant – qualities that correspond to his depictions as a god. But he controls a dangerous power, as the crew discover in a number of ways: their phasers are all fused, the transporter device and communicators are inoperative, and Scott is injured by lightning strikes for other willful acts he commits against Apollo. Moreover, he has developed a romantic interest in Palamas, angering Scott.

Aboard the Enterprise, Spock is proceeding under the same assumption, and the crew may be making headway: Lieutenant Uhura rigs a subspace bypass circuit to restore communications, and Sulu discovers a strange radiated power on the planet with no clear source. Spock asks the helmsman to scan the entire planet for the source of the power readings by looking where it is not – a simple process of elimination. Sulu, along with Leslie's assistance, begins the scan.

Apollo, meanwhile, has taken Palamas away from the rest of the Enterprise crew. He tells her the gods left Earth when mankind turned away from them, and that they need admiration just like Humans need food. They returned to their home, an empty place without worshipers. But they lacked the strength to leave, and so they waited. And over the course of time, all but Apollo discorporated. Apollo claims the gods are immortal, and cannot die – not, at least, in the way Humans understand death. But even they eventually reach a point of no return; they "spread themselves upon the wind… thinner, and thinner, until only the wind remained…" He then mentions that he "knew [Carolyn] would come to the stars" and be forever by his side as his queen. By her own admission, Palamas does not understand, but Apollo seduces her by saying that fifty centuries ago, gods had taken mortals with them to love and care for, as his parents did.

As on the Enterprise, the landing party has discovered the energy flow, but is equally unable to isolate it. Chekov's theory is that Apollo can channel this flow of energy through his body without harm to himself, much like the electric eel on Earth or the giant dry worm of Antos IV. Finding the source of this energy is top priority. McCoy notes that, although Apollo is generally a standard humanoid, he has a mysterious extra organ in his chest. Apollo returns to the landing party and tells them Palamas is no concern to them anymore. Scott is enraged and charges at Apollo with a vase, but the god strikes him down with a bolt of lightning, throwing him off his feet.

Chekov observes that, as Apollo vanishes, he appears tired or pained. It seems that Apollo has a limited reservoir, and when he expends too much energy, he must retreat and recharge his energy cells. They therefore plan to force him to expend his power, and weaken him so that he might be overpowered.

Aboard ship, Spock asks Kyle to take his equations to the nuclear electronics lab so that they can generate M-rays on selected wavelengths to punch a few holes in Apollo's force field to fire their phaser banks through.

Enterprise crew ignoring Apollo

"Come here. I know you're trying to escape me. It's useless."

On Apollo's return, the landing party attempts to goad him into attacking someone, but Palamas, who was not part of the plan, ruins it in her well-meaning attempt to save Kirk from Apollo's wrath. Kirk begins to devise another plan – but notes that it depends on Palamas's loyalty. If his plan does not work, Kirk notes, the Enterprise crew had better get used to herding goats.

Act Three[]

Palamas has fallen in love with Apollo, who has told her she will be his consort, the mother of a new race of gods, and will inspire men throughout the universe. Palamas is returned to the landing party, weakened but content. Palamas tells Kirk of Apollo's plans for the crew to live on the surface of the planet, but Kirk tells her she has work to do after noticing her weakened state. "All our lives, here and on the ship, depend on you." She must spurn Apollo; to do otherwise condemns the crew to "nothing less than slavery." Kirk reminds her of her loyalty to Humanity, since that is where her duty (and his) lie. Palamas reveals her sympathy for Apollo's plan, but Kirk speaks to her of duty, orders, and the Humanity she shares is tied together beyond any untying with Kirk and others that she cannot share with Apollo. Kirk seems to be getting through to Palamas – when Apollo summons her back. She says "He's calling me," but no voice is heard. It is uncertain whether Apollo uses some form of telepathy to summon her. Kirk reminds her of her duty once more before she disappears.

Act Four[]

Uhura is successful in contacting the landing party. Spock determines that the god's powers come from his temple. The Enterprise has used Spock's technique with M-rays to pierce the force field around the ship. The ship could fire phasers, but Kirk needs to know exactly where Apollo and Palamas are first before they are fired.

Apollo's temple under attack, remastered

The attack on Apollo's temple

Apollo and Palamas are kissing passionately, but then Palamas tells Apollo she has merely been studying him; she could no more love him than love "a new species of bacteria." Of course, she is lying through her teeth when she says this, and is broken-hearted, but she has to put her responsibility before any romantic desire, no matter how reluctant she is to do so. She walks away, and there is wind and thunder, noticed by the rest of the landing party. Palamas screams, and the sounds appear to indicate that she and Apollo are near the temple, and a gigantic Apollo looms nearby. Kirk angles to lure Apollo closer to the temple – his power source – and orders phaser fire to destroy the temple, despite the close proximity of the landing party. The Enterprise shudders from lightning bolts fired at it by Apollo, but continues firing phasers until the temple has been completely destroyed.

Apollo, rejected by a mortal woman and bereft of his powers, asks for the Humans' forgiveness and then fades away – spreading himself upon the winds to join his fellow gods. After he is gone, McCoy and Kirk regret what they had to do. Now believing that Apollo was the god of the ancient Greeks, Kirk talks about all that Apollo's people gave to Earth – their culture and philosophy – and wonders whether another outcome was possible. He muses to McCoy if it really would have hurt them to have gathered just a few laurel leaves. The Enterprise departs Pollux IV for open space.

Log entries[]

Memorable quotes[]

"Bones, could you get that excited over a cup of coffee?"
"Even from here, I can tell his pulse rate's up."
"Gentlemen!"

- Kirk and McCoy, observing Scott flirting with Palamas


"I like to think of it not so much as losing an officer as gaining… Actually, I'm losing an officer."

- Kirk to McCoy, about Scott and the consequences of his love for Carolyn


"Captain Kirk, I invite you and your officers to join me. But do not bring that one. The one with the pointed ears. He is much like Pan, and Pan always bored me."

- Apollo, inviting the whole Enterprise crew to Pollux IV except Spock


"If you want to play god and call yourself Apollo, that's your business, but you're no god to us, mister!"

- Kirk, to Apollo


"Insults are effective only where emotion is present."

- Spock, on his rejection by Apollo


"I am Apollo!"
"And I am tsar of all the Russias!"

- Apollo and Chekov, as Apollo identifies himself


"I'm sorry, sir. I never met a god before."
"And you haven't yet."

- Chekov and Kirk, just after the above exchange


"I have four hundred and thirty people on that ship up there!"
"Not anymore, Captain! They are mine now. To save, to cherish, or to destroy at my will."

- Kirk and Apollo


"To coin a phrase, fascinating."

- McCoy, after the giant Apollo suddenly looks tired and vanishes


"A god cannot survive as a memory."

- Apollo to Palamas, explaining why the other gods withered away


"Spock's contaminating this boy, Jim."

- McCoy, as Chekov provides Kirk detailed information


"Where's Apollo?"
"He disappeared again like the cat in that Russian story."
"Don't you mean the English story? The Cheshire Cat?"
"Cheshire? No… Minsk, perhaps…"

- Kirk and Chekov, after Apollo attacks Scott again and vanishes


"Approach me. I said approach me!"
"We're busy!" (to Scott) "Look after the girl."
"You will gather laurel leaves! Light the ancient fires! Kill a deer! Make your sacrifices to me! Apollo has spoken!!"

- Apollo and Kirk


"I offer you more than your wildest dreams have ever imagined. You'll become the mother of a new race of gods. You'll inspire the universe. All men will revere you, almost as a god yourself. And I shall love you, time without end, worlds without end. You shall complete me, and I you."

- Apollo, to Palamas


"Mankind has no need for gods. We find the one quite adequate."

- Kirk to Apollo, on how Humanity has changed since Apollo left Earth


"A father doesn't destroy his children."

- Palamas, pleading with Apollo to spare Kirk's life


"We share the same history, the same heritage, the same lives. We're tied together beyond any untying. Man or woman, it makes no difference. We're Human."

- Kirk, convincing Palamas to reject Apollo


"The time has passed. There is no room for gods."

- Apollo, before he fades away for the last time


"I wish we hadn't had to do this."
"So do I. They gave us so much… In a way, they began the Golden Age. Would it have hurt us, I wonder, just to have gathered a few laurel leaves?"

- McCoy and Kirk, lamenting on the death of the Greek gods

Background information[]

Production timeline[]

Story and production[]

  • The title is taken from Adonais: An Elegy on the Death of John Keats by Percy Bysshe Shelley. Line 415 reads "Who mourns for Adonais?". Shelley's Adonais is derived from Adonis, a male figure of Greek mythology associated with fertility. "Adonais" is also a pun on "Adonai", one of the Hebrew spoken names for God in the Holy Bible.
  • According to Allan Asherman's The Star Trek Compendium, an ending to this episode whose abandonment network censors forced would have revealed that Palamas was pregnant by Apollo (see Apocrypha). Shortly after the production of the episode concluded, costume designer William Ware Theiss, who designed the gown Palamas wore when she was not in uniform, said that he preferred this ending: "Because I'm hung up on Greek mythology, I always preferred the script in the version the studio killed, wherein the ending is bittersweet rather than tragic. Dr. McCoy discovers the young female officer is due to bear the child of Apollo." (Inside Star Trek, issue 7, p. 5) In fact, James Blish uses this ending in his adaptation of the episode in Star Trek 7:
  • KIRK: "Yes, Bones? Somebody ill?"
  • McCOY: "Carolyn Palamas rejected her breakfast this morning."
  • KIRK: "Some bug going around?"
  • McCOY: "She's pregnant, Jim. I've just examined her."
  • KIRK: "What?"
  • McCOY: "You heard me."
  • KIRK: "Apollo?"
  • McCOY: "Yes"
  • KIRK: "Bones, it's impossible!"
  • McCOY: "Spock, may I put a question to this gadget of yours? I'd like to ask it if I'm to turn my Sickbay into a delivery room for a Human child–or a god. My medical courses did not include obstetrics for infant gods."
  • In the original script, the gods and other mythological figures were mentioned by their Latin/Roman names, but in the revised final draft (and the finished episode) they are called by their original Greek equivalents, possibly at the suggestion of series researcher Kellam de Forest.[1] (archived May 12, 2013) The one exception to this is Hercules, whose name would be Herakles in Greek.
  • Arch Dalzell acted as the director of photography for two days of the shoot, as regular cinematographer Jerry Finnerman had fallen ill. Finnerman resumed work after two days, finishing the episode. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season Two) [2]
  • Gilbert Ralston's original story, drawn from a premise by Gene Roddenberry, was heavily revised by Gene L. Coon for it to become the episode as ultimately featured. Coon remained otherwise uncredited for it. Partially in error in his belief that the episode was Coon's, his friend and protégé Russell Bates intended his Emmy Award-winning Star Trek: The Animated Series episode, "How Sharper Than a Serpent's Tooth", as a subtle homage to the episode. [3]
  • The plot of "The God Thing", Gene Roddenberry's rejected script for the first motion picture, resembled this episode. Star Trek V: The Final Frontier also covered much the same ground, and various other Star Trek outings have revisited the "ancient astronaut" trope. Several major "non-fiction" works dealing with alien gods appeared in the mid-sixties before Who Mourns for Adonais?– Robert Charroux's One Hundred Thousand Years of Man's Unknown History (1963), Peter Kolosimo's best-selling Timeless Earth and W. Raymond Drake's Gods or Spacemen? (both in 1964). However, H.P. Lovecraft's horror fiction predates all of the above by decades.[4]

Cast and characters[]

  • According to Michael Forest, the producers originally wanted Jon Voight for the role of Apollo. However, he was hired for another project. [5]
  • The producers were looking for someone with an English dialect and Shakespearean theatrics to pull off the Apollo role. First, they wanted to find someone in England, but rather decided to look for an actor at the San Diego Shakespeare festival. The head of the theatre recommended Michael Forest, who was already in Hollywood, making films at the time. Forest was called in for an audition, where he first had to take off his shirt, to let them see if he had the muscled physique needed for the part. Next, they asked him to read some lines in an English accent. Forest refused, claiming he could not do that, but he was able to speak in a Mid-Atlantic accent, probably more suitable for the character. He did it, and they gave him the role. [6]
  • Forest had previously co-starred with Leonard Nimoy in Jean Genet's theatrical play, Deathwatch, and the subsequent movie adaptation, which also featured Robert Ellenstein and a score by Gerald Fried.

Props and special effects[]

Apollo's temple under attack, trailer

Trailer effects

  • In the trailer, the phasers fired by the Enterprise at the temple are blue. In the episode itself, they are red. They would once again be blue in the remastered version of this episode (see below).
  • A traveling matte was used to allow a giant Apollo to appear with the landing party in the foreground at the end of act one. (The Star Trek Compendium, p. 73)
  • Apollo's temple was constructed on an indoor studio set. Swaying trees (courtesy of hidden stagehands) and dubbed-in bird sounds were combined with stock footage of an outdoor lake and adequately conveyed the illusion of being outdoors. (The Star Trek Compendium, p. 73)
  • Leslie Parrish wore the famous Bill Theiss dress again in another Desilu/Paramount show: a 1968 episode of Mannix titled "The Girl in the Frame."
  • The scene in which Apollo flips Scott to the side was actually executed by James Doohan's stunt double, Jay Jones, who was wearing a special harness with which he was pulled backward on cue. (The Star Trek Compendium, p. 73). Jones nearly slammed into a step prop which could have caused serious injury.
  • The second season blooper reel shows Michael Forest parading very effeminately in his Apollo costume. Forest was supposedly displeased with his costume, and this was his way of showing it. The blooper briefly cuts to William Shatner rolling his eyes and Forest blowing a kiss.
  • In the original version, the hand holding the Enterprise disappears when the starship fires the phasers at Apollo's temple. In the remastered version, the Enterprise phasers fire through the hand, which then starts to dissolve then finally disappears.
  • In "The Ultimate Computer", Kirk can be seen operating in his cabin the small computer on which Sulu attempts to calculate weak points in the force field, just before McCoy enters with the Finagle's Folly.

Music[]

Continuity[]

  • This is the only time in TOS that a star is both referred to as its Bayer designation and ancient name, specifically β Geminorum / Pollux.
  • This is the first of two times in TOS Season 2 that Kirk tells an Enterprise crewmember he has earned his pay for the week. In this episode, after Chekov suggests how Apollo might be generating and controlling his energy, Kirk says, "Mr. Chekov, I think you've earned your pay for the week." The next instance will be in "The Doomsday Machine".
  • Although Kirk explains to Apollo, "Mankind has no need for gods. We find the one quite adequate", the god in question is not identified.
  • Apollo's "giant green hand" is referred to in Star Trek Beyond as one of the possible causes of the disappearance of the USS Franklin, and appears in the end credits of that film.
  • The Enterprise's encounter with Apollo's hand is also glimpsed in ST: "Ephraim and Dot".
  • McCoy's comment after first encountering Apollo, "To coin a phrase, fascinating", is made in the absence of the phrase's usual user, Spock, who is still aboard the Enterprise at the time because Apollo finds him similar to Pan, whom he says "always bored me".

Reception[]

  • Marc Daniels cited this episode as his favorite among those he directed, claiming "it all came together so well". (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season Two, p. 114)
  • Leslie Parrish stated, "Whenever I watch it, I go right back to the whole thing again and cry my way through it. I relive it. My impression of it is that it's one piece of work that I'm very proud of. Of all the work I did, this is outstanding, because it is rooted in something which I believe so deeply." (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season Two, p. 115)
  • Michael Forest recalled working with his co-stars, "Leslie [Parrish] was a delightful person to work with; no problems; never any difficulties; we would just discuss what we were going to do and we would do it. She was excellent and very personable. William [Shatner] was a bit of a problem, however. You never saw me standing with him; we were always in different shots. We would be talking to one another, but we wouldn't be on camera at the same time. I'm sure that's what he stipulated – because I was so much taller." (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season Two, p. 111)
  • Jason Alexander cites this episode as his favorite of the original series, describing it as "thought-provoking, beautiful, and very sad." (TV Guide: Vol. 44, No. 34, Issue #2265, p. 33)
  • In The Nitpicker's Guide for Classic Trekkers, author Phil Farrand expresses the opinion that this episode's creators missed an opportunity to explain James Doohan's missing finger, believing that Apollo's destruction of Scott’s phaser could also have severely damaged his finger.

Remastered information[]

The remastered version of this episode premiered in syndication the weekend of 12 January 2008. It featured new shots of the giant hand in space and an enhanced version of the phaser attack on Apollo's temple.

The next remastered episode to air was "Let That Be Your Last Battlefield".

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